The first cut of the film went well and had a good flow to it. However there was key parts that where missing like the most critical; and key background to the storyline the interrogator. This cause the need for another filming day and the new footage will be in twined with the old base that was created to solve little niggles. The plan is it cut in the missing film and then decided what is needed to finish it or just to give it the final bit of editing flare.
One thing that was highlighted when someone watched our film, was it's long dialog.
This is something that i will have to work on whilst keeping the story line intact.
Here are a selection of feedback's that we gathered, which highlight these dialog issues;
Sam: Its a good storyline and i get the concept but by the end i was just turning off, shorten it !!!!!!!
Steve: Way too long and it doesn't really say anything thats relevant, and i started to lose interest.
Lilly: I liked the location and the use of camera shots, however in places the dialog was rather long, and dominates the scene.
